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Old 09-27-2003, 05:26 PM
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At the Railing

There were people partying - and lights and laughter. Then the laughter stopped, and there was only blue, and cold, and silence.

But I still remember them , at the railing - drinks in hand, dressed in their finest...
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Old 09-27-2003, 07:15 PM
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oooo - dance band on the Titanic. Very errie, strong and quiet. I like it.
The water reminds you of the power of nature and to caution against playing with mother nature. It still has the party feel -- with a quiet undertone of finality.
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Old 09-28-2003, 06:06 PM
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Rob:

I'd crop and/or adjust it so the railing didn't exit the image dead-center on the right side. I think a little higher would add a smidge of visual interest.

~Danny~
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Old 10-12-2003, 11:02 PM
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I like it allot, very errie and cold. I like that kinda thing. The two things I dont care for is the blown out hightlights at the top and the wave that appears at the bottom right hand side.
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