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| Capt'n Nathan Here's the oringinal: http://www.thelightsrightstudio.com/...08_Web1000.jpg Here's the sepia tone: http://www.thelightsrightstudio.com/...d_Web1000t.jpg I was testing the Mystical Tint, Tone, Color plug-in from Auto FX software. I used four of their effects: sepia, deepen tones, enriched black, and warmth. I also used the PS Filter | Noise | Add Noise with a settoing of 1.85. I was pleased with the high contrast. Comments are welcome! Cheers, Mitch |
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| Captain Nathan has a very nicely toned image. It looks like it belongs in a richly appointed study, beautifully framed and hanging over a black walnut table on which sits some old time mariner's tool. |
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| I have to admit that my first reaction to the toned version of this image was, "Yikes!". It's not trite by any stretch of the imagination, but I found it a bit harsh to my eye. Just as an experiment, I whipped a quick sepia/blue tone on it and tweaked the contrast just a bit with levels. Then I hit it with some smart sharpening for good measure. It could still use some work with contrast and I'm not entirely sure I used the right brown for the sepia, but there it is. Hope you don't mind. :-) Last edited by Mark Adams; 09-25-2004 at 01:40 PM. |
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| It's a nice interpretation, Mark. I certainly do not mind people trying different approaches. I'm pleased if my images stimulate some good-natured discussion. Cheers, Mitch |
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We're doing art, so subjective impressions are going to differ. Cheers, Mitch |
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| Hi Mitch, great job on the sepia toning. My trouble is not with the sepia job, but with the framing of the original. Too much water. If the water were still, there would be reflections to break up large empty space, but as it is, it adds nothing to the picture. I attach a cropped version of your original, I think it looks better, but this is of course just an opinion. |
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Cheers, Mitch |
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| Hello All, I'm in agreeance with the feedback. My question was. Why sepia? Using Gary's suggestion of cropping out the sky and water, I took this nice picture and converted it to a b/w, added borders and a tag line. I find it puts more emphasis on the boats and all of the names on the boats. Brad |
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I like the name! Nice. I'll consider B&W. I'm still inclined toward the bronze or a more customary sepia, but that's a personal preference. I am liking Gary's crop more and more. Cheers, Mitch |
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| I think the crop really makes this pic. It's a horizontal composition and needs to be cropped into a beautiful, linear image as was done by Gary. Brad's take on it is finished and refined looking. I can see that hanging as a commercial image in fine seafood restaurants (or a nice seaside hotel) on any of the three coasts. The white "matting" around the B/W image works very well. It's sophisticated. A sepia might work as well with black matting, but I'd have to see it. Unfortunately, that kind of crop leaves little room for ad copy. :-) Last edited by Mark Adams; 09-27-2004 at 11:04 PM. |
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| But seriously.... I was looking for an inspirational message for this graphic and I thought of the Psalm that begins "They that go down to the sea in ships..." Not being a religious person or Biblical scholar, I had to look it up. I found it at the link below where I stumbled onto some TERRIFIC old snapshots. Check this site out. I think it's terrific, whatever it is. They that go down to the sea in ships Oh yea, the picture. How's this? Last edited by Mark Adams; 09-27-2004 at 11:44 PM. |
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