Image Help - - Please, please help

vassya · #1 04-22-2007, 08:38 AM

Hello
I am complytely new in this eorum and sorry for my english.
I need your help , really, please
This 2 images was composite with 3D rendered glass and photo
I dont know if you see that it's glass and how i can make this image more better.
2 weeks i made the modifications and i cannot to find solution.
Thank you thank you very much for help

http://vassya.seventy75five.com/images/eyes1.jpg
http://vassya.seventy75five.com/images/essaie2.jpg

Godmother · #2 04-22-2007, 09:04 AM

The first one is better.

I think you have acomplished a great look. No entirelly realistic but I think it adds to the final image.

I'd advice not to change a thing. In fact... do a serie of them, and you'll have a winne exposition.

Keep it up

Natalia

vassya · #3 04-22-2007, 09:42 AM

Thank you really thank you Natalia.
This is my 20 version for art director
And hi cannot really explain me what exactly hi want but one thing tah hi told me that it's not enough good.
And i really dont know how i can make this better.
Thank you

P.S Your name is like russian name Natalia ))))
"Spasibo za pomosh"

Yours work is ammmmmazing and beautifuls

lurch · #4 04-22-2007, 10:45 AM

I also like the first one much better.

Maybe your art director wants the glass to have more reflections or reflective highlights. Sorry I have no idea how to do that.

Cassidy · #5 04-22-2007, 11:06 AM

How about something like this? Using your second picture, added levels to darken quite a bit, then masked in a slight gaussian blur for the facial features but not the iris of the eye or major cracks in the glass

Jerryb · #6 04-22-2007, 11:38 AM

hi ,
now it would have been nice the art instructor gave you a more definitive reason what he liked or disliked.... smile....

your project is very interesting and provocative.. I like it overall...

now my self I am novice but what I notice
1. like previous mentioned the eyes do not seem natural.. and on this project I would think that important part... they look slightly too large...
2. another thing i noticed in both pictures.. the eye looks like it a cut and paste job!
a. the eyelids do not appear to be part of the picture it self.... to me that was obvious... yo can easily tell where the orginal eyelid ends and the eyelid that part of cut out eye starts
b. also the eyelashes between the main picture and the cutout do not match... looks like eyelashes from one picture and put on another... you want them to be natuarl looking I would think

when you cut the eye originally you left in part of the eyelids and lashes and i the first picture looks like you left part of the eyebrow and alittle of thewhite of the eye all that to me noticable... what i think I would do is recut the eye where you only have just the iris itself!! and nothing else then go in and resize... probably use your magnetic lasso or just the regular lasso and then when you go an past it in you can then use your resize/transform feature to size the eyball properly.. and then a very slight blur around the edge of the cutout to help make it blend in.

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Originally Posted by vassya

Hello
I am complytely new in this eorum and sorry for my english.
I need your help , really, please
This 2 images was composite with 3D rendered glass and photo
I dont know if you see that it's glass and how i can make this image more better.
2 weeks i made the modifications and i cannot to find solution.
Thank you thank you very much for help

http://vassya.seventy75five.com/images/eyes1.jpg
http://vassya.seventy75five.com/images/essaie2.jpg

vassya · #7 04-22-2007, 03:14 PM

Lurch-Thank you !!!! i made alreaydy the reflection but it's needed to keep very vissible behind the glass. Thank you for advise.
Cassidy -than k you from all my heart but i cannot see image.
JerryB- THANKS A LOT Wow! I am novice and it's my first post and i wandered to have all yours words, advises and tips.
Thank you from all my heart for you
And of courzd i will try to follow this
Sincerely Vassya