Make your Mama Proud

Mchilly · #1 08-22-2007, 11:34 PM

I have created a very sweet portrait of a young girl caressing her little sister

Take a look:

Original:
http://img521.imageshack.us/img521/2...lxx1kg2.th.jpg

Edited:
http://img224.imageshack.us/img224/5...roudsf5.th.jpg

Swampy · #2 08-24-2007, 07:05 AM

Mchilly, the crop is great, but the finished product has lost all color and detail. It's way blown out and weak.

DannyRaphael · #3 08-27-2007, 12:33 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Mchilly

I have created a very sweet portrait of a young girl caressing her little sister

Take a look:

Original:
http://img521.imageshack.us/img521/2...lxx1kg2.th.jpg

Edited:
http://img224.imageshack.us/img224/5...roudsf5.th.jpg

Images too small to critique beyond "too light."

Mchilly · #4 08-27-2007, 11:07 PM

I really had a hard time posting images here

http://img296.imageshack.us/img296/7...xvplxx1pr7.jpg
http://img511.imageshack.us/img511/2...rsproudgj4.jpg

Hope this kinda bigger now for you to critique

Kraellin · #5 08-27-2007, 11:16 PM

much better on the size.

i like the crop.

add a little more color to the faces. nice job on taking the red down on the baby. that one could probably be ok like you've got it now. but the older girl is really quite white and needs a bit of color. nice text work too.

Syd · #6 08-28-2007, 01:18 AM

Yes, perfect crop Mchilly!

Syd