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Old 08-23-2007, 12:34 AM
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Make your Mama Proud

I have created a very sweet portrait of a young girl caressing her little sister Take a look:

Original:
http://img521.imageshack.us/img521/2...lxx1kg2.th.jpg

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http://img224.imageshack.us/img224/5...roudsf5.th.jpg
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Old 08-24-2007, 08:05 AM
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Re: Make your Mama Proud

Mchilly, the crop is great, but the finished product has lost all color and detail. It's way blown out and weak.
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Old 08-27-2007, 01:33 PM
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Re: Make your Mama Proud

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I have created a very sweet portrait of a young girl caressing her little sister Take a look:

Original:
http://img521.imageshack.us/img521/2...lxx1kg2.th.jpg

Edited:
http://img224.imageshack.us/img224/5...roudsf5.th.jpg
Images too small to critique beyond "too light."
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Old 08-28-2007, 12:07 AM
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Re: Make your Mama Proud

I really had a hard time posting images here

http://img296.imageshack.us/img296/7...xvplxx1pr7.jpg
http://img511.imageshack.us/img511/2...rsproudgj4.jpg

Hope this kinda bigger now for you to critique
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Old 08-28-2007, 12:16 AM
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Re: Make your Mama Proud

much better on the size.

i like the crop.

add a little more color to the faces. nice job on taking the red down on the baby. that one could probably be ok like you've got it now. but the older girl is really quite white and needs a bit of color. nice text work too.
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Old 08-28-2007, 02:18 AM
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Re: Make your Mama Proud

Yes, perfect crop Mchilly!

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