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episodic 12-28-2008 03:16 PM

Would love feed back on an image I created. . .
 
http://www.flickr.com/photos/solennial/3144200245/


I 'remixed' three different creative common's photos that were attribution. The attribution is in the link. . .

Would love feedback. . .
I'm still learning.

Swampy 12-29-2008 08:47 AM

Re: Would love feed back on an image I created. .
 
Hi, episodic! Welcome to RetouchPro! Explore and Enjoy!

I found your creation a little out of focus and flat. Other than that, the overall concept is great.

episodic 12-29-2008 10:02 AM

Re: Would love feed back on an image I created. .
 
What could I do to prevent the 'flat' part. I think the out of focus was due to me processing it as a painting - if it wasn't let me know.

I want to understand the 'flat' part though.

TIA!

Swampy 12-29-2008 12:12 PM

Re: Would love feed back on an image I created. .
 
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After a second look I guess 'flatness' is not a good term. Sameness might be more appropriate. The doll house is too close in color value to the field and just kind of gets lost. I did a Hue Saturation adjustment on a selection of the doll house then cleaned up the mask a little just to make it stand out.


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