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Old 11-30-2008, 05:26 AM
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Okay, what do you think?

I'm new and I'm not sure where to put this at all, but this sub forum is the best place I could see. If I'm wrong, please correct me. ^^'

Basically I got bored, found some stock images from my stash and created this:
http://mistress-evalaina.deviantart....hite-100958051

I'd love some creative critisism, but please be nice. I've only had PS for about six months, and got my tablet a month ago, so it's nothing really special.
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Old 11-30-2008, 09:21 AM
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Re: Okay, what do you think?

Hello and welcome Evalaina I think this probably the right forum for this work which is great look forward to seeing more of your work

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Old 11-30-2008, 02:44 PM
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Re: Okay, what do you think?

Thank you. I'll be posting more up soon.
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Old 12-06-2008, 07:14 AM
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Re: Okay, what do you think?

I like it, good work.
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Old 12-08-2008, 07:07 AM
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Re: Okay, what do you think?

Very pleasing to the eye. If I saw this version of snow white as a child I might have grown up much faster!
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Old 12-08-2008, 10:13 AM
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Re: Okay, what do you think?

This picture really looks great. I like it very much.
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Old 12-09-2008, 10:03 PM
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Re: Okay, what do you think?

Not sure about the snowwhite moniker, but I really like the composition of your picture.
Really nice.
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Old 12-10-2008, 07:32 AM
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Re: Okay, what do you think?

great work...love it.
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Old 12-11-2008, 05:21 PM
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Re: Okay, what do you think?

I was looking for the letter in the owls talons... as in Harry Potter! Lovely work however.
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Old 12-11-2008, 06:47 PM
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Re: Okay, what do you think?

Here's some constructive feedback for you

1. Shadows.
the biggest give away here is that your model is not casting a shadow and there is a distinct lightsource (the window). Also the shadows on the model are from a light source left of frame, the shadows on your background are coming from the window.

2. Check the scale. If you're looking for a realistic composite then your model is a little undersized. a good visual clue here is the floorboards. These have 'realworld' standard sizing most people will recognize.



these would be the main 2 points.

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