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Latest comp - Rapunzel.

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Old 11-20-2009, 02:52 AM
waffeliron waffeliron is offline
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Latest comp - Rapunzel.

Hey, I have just finished a new picture and would love some feedback on it, its based on Rapunzel!

It can be seen on my blog here:-

http://lasoothemoon.blogspot.com/


Cheers, Matt.
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Old 11-20-2009, 07:31 AM
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Re: Latest comp - Rapunzel.

No offense intended but it looks like paper dolls or cardboard cut outs. Everything is very straight edged and flat, and the added shadows look "fake". Also, the hi-light at the top of the window shouldn't be there since there is no glass or other surface for it to reflect off of.
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Old 11-20-2009, 08:44 AM
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Re: Latest comp - Rapunzel.

Thanks, I think your right.. I need to go back and fix some stuff...
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Old 11-20-2009, 10:18 AM
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Re: Latest comp - Rapunzel.

Had another play with it now.
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Old 11-20-2009, 01:53 PM
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Re: Latest comp - Rapunzel.

The repunzel composition is not balanced to my eye.
I've repositioned it to better balance it out.

Darkened the hair and added more 3D to that love crazed man.
It still needs something more for completion sake.
Maybe create a character out of the cloud or have some Ivy/Flowers on the tower!
Maybe have his horse standing near by.

This is only intended as help and not to be inferred as judgmental in any way.
Have fun!
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