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Old 11-21-2009, 04:35 PM
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my latest composite

Let me know what you think.
It took 6+ images to do it.
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Old 11-21-2009, 05:19 PM
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Re: my latest composite

Sorry but cant view the page it says its private.
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Old 11-21-2009, 06:35 PM
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Sorry about that! It should work now.
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Old 11-21-2009, 09:39 PM
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Wow, nothing huh?
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Old 11-21-2009, 09:49 PM
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Re: my latest composite

Nice work, I like most all of them.
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Old 12-01-2009, 05:29 AM
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Re: my latest composite

It looks good overall except for for the following:
1) You could use a bit of atmospheric perspective to show depth and distance.
2) The reflection needs a bit more refinements, particularly adding a bit of ripples/texture
and not stretching the landscape too much. The reflections are now "taller" than the actual landscape itself.
3)Clouds look good except for the botched up cloud on the bottom left side, where the blue sky overlay the cloud, which should be the other way around.
4) By scale, the clouds at the bottom should be smaller and not as big as the clouds on top.It's a perspective issue that I have.

Lastly, do take my comments as positive constructive criticsm. Looking forward to see a new improved version. Take care.
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Old 12-02-2009, 02:12 AM
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Re: my latest composite

I like it. Everything looks good except the reflection. It is too blurry and it doesn't look real. I think adding a little texture to it should make quite an improvement. Regards
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