christine,
much better, thank you!
you've done a very nice job of cleaning things up here. so, well done on that!
i'm not a big fan of colorizing black and whites, but that's a personal preference that's partially swayed by the fact that i'm not that good in doing this myself, so, ok

the parts you have done this way look fine. i'd be very tempted at this point to continue, especially on the skin areas. add some reds back in to give her a bit of tone. but again, this is a preference thing. the bits you have done look fine.
the dress looks a bit odd, almost as if it were made of paper. the shading needs to be checked. maybe a bit of light smudging to smooth these out. i believe part of this effect is from how you cleaned the image and the bends and tears that were there. there looks to be still some crease marks showing through or something. these shld be evened out a bit or smoothed over. the trick is in doing this without losing texture or color. clone, heal, push, smudge, and the makeover tool (similar to heal in
ps) are the tools i use for this. you might also accomplish this with a duplicate layer, a mask, a blending mode and some blur. but i believe i'd go with the hand tools. you could also try the 'smooth' brush, the lighten/darken brush, or maybe even another of the brush types. use low opacities on the brushes to start to see how they are going to affect things.
there is a dark area in the background, next to her face on our right side, that doesnt look very good. i'd smooth/clone this out and blend it in with the rest of the color and luminosity of the background. it appears to be an old soot mark that wasnt taken completely out.
there are also some shadows on her face, on her right cheek and jaw that seem a bit uneven, blotchy. a small opacity smudge would even those out.
it's a darling picture and despite what might seem like a lot of criticisms here, you've done a very good job!
craig