neb,
yup, we all miss flora. we're going to have to talk to her husband about all this gypsy lifestyle stuff
and happy anniversary! (i hit mine not too long ago as well. is it a year already?)
as for your piece, the first thing i do when i look at these is overlay the attachments and click back and forth looking to see if the original figure still looks like the original figure. yours does, so, well done! that's 90% of the work. so often you see in cloning work the evidence of cloning itself. features get altered, a nose gets clipped, an eye partially cut or clipped by the clone tools and so on. yours didnt do this. the features remained intact. so, well done!
you missed a bit on duplicating the shadows of the original, but that's in the background and of secondary importance.
i also wonder just a bit about the line on the nose where that one scratch/tear was. you seemed to avoid doing anything there and i'm thinking there shld be a tiny bit more shadow there. (his left side of the nose, near the tip where that one hole was). it's a small thing and doesnt really distract from the overall, but i was just wondering about it.
and lastly, i'd clean up the white of that collar a bit. it looks 'dirty' still. it does need to keep a bit of texture/shading, but it just looks dirty. you dont want it pure white and you do want to maintain the look and feel of the overall image, but i think we can say that part of that is dirt and could stand to go. just be careful of a monotone if you do do this; you dont want that either.
the rest is preference. i'd be very tempted to change the contrast between the person and the background to 'bring him forward' in the image, to make him stand out more. but, some folks dont like to do that because it doesnt 'maintain the original quality and character' of the image. so, that's just a preferences thing.
overall, it's a very nice job. you've maintained the integrity of the main portion of the image through some difficult fixes and that's the main thing! cloning is always dangerous. it's like sculpting with dynamite in that you're always in danger of removing too much. so, well done!
craig