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Old 11-18-2006, 02:14 PM
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C & C wanted

this one is right out of cam fuji s5000

http://i22.photobucket.com/albums/b3...focus/0077.jpg

this one is ps

http://i22.photobucket.com/albums/b3...focus/1jon.jpg
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Old 11-18-2006, 02:25 PM
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Re: senior picture

I don't know if it was intentional, but the background has more contrast than the subject. The picture looks good, but the background pops out more than the subject.
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Old 11-18-2006, 05:20 PM
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Re: senior picture

I agree, the background is way to brite and way to sharp, if it was darker and more out of focus, the subject would stand out more. Was there a reson for removing the tat? Around here that would kill the sale.

But the biggest error is the bridge growing out of the subjects head!
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Old 11-18-2006, 05:30 PM
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Re: senior picture

I agree also that is too much contrast between the background and subject.
I did a levels and a curves adjustment. and Then I blurred the background.
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Old 11-18-2006, 07:30 PM
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Re: senior picture

My try.

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Old 11-25-2006, 09:15 AM
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Re: senior picture

using the Digital Grey Card and then adding back another cast.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v2...rdgcbridge.jpg
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