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Old 01-04-2007, 08:51 PM
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Re: Glamour retouch!

Mine.
Tried not to go overboard on the skin smoothing.

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Old 01-04-2007, 08:56 PM
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Re: Glamour retouch!

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Originally Posted by Ant
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COLOR everywhere, it's a mess
EYELASHES - too long, not real looking
HAIR - huge mess, including eyebrows.
LIPS - cmon now..
Neck lines - simplify
SKIN - blur fest
EARPIERCING - always remove hole if no earrings on

Overall - attention to details. Don't remove information - good. Add information that isn't in the original.
I think thats great info, Ant.
I didnt catch your post before I did my retouch.. I wish I had. I would've fixed the ear, eyebrows and neck.

All feedback shouldnt be "OMG GREAT JOB". Its only through real critique that any of us will get any better.
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Old 01-04-2007, 10:21 PM
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Originally Posted by Peano
Begin with "cmon now" for the lips. What guidance do you get from that? How about color "everywhere it's a mess"? Tell us how do you will use that comment to adjust color in this image
So you can't decipher 2 out of 7 points he made?
Than means he made 5 you can figure out... not a bad ratio. Those 5 had value, too.

Not everything has to be a warm-hearted fluffy hugfest.

My critique of yours is that it looks like the face is a painting thats been pasted onto a photo. The hair and body look real, but the face doesn't. The eyes are over-done and look toy-like. The facial skin is over-smoothed.
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Old 01-05-2007, 03:58 AM
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Re: Glamour retouch!

I'm not sure which one I prefer...
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Old 01-05-2007, 08:55 AM
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Re: Glamour retouch!

Ziaphra.....nice job removing that bkgrd object, really cleans the shot up and adds some pop.
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Old 01-05-2007, 08:58 AM
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Re: Glamour retouch!

Thank you...it really bugged me.
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Old 01-05-2007, 09:37 AM
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Re: Glamour retouch!

wow thanks for te reactions guys, okey ant was right for some things but i dont know how she try to mean it on te photo.. ( im sorry if you dont know what i mean to say) and thanks for te rest you know

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Old 01-05-2007, 09:48 AM
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Re: Glamour retouch!

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So you can't decipher 2 out of 7 points he made?
Than means he made 5 you can figure out... not a bad ratio. Those 5 had value, too.

Not everything has to be a warm-hearted fluffy hugfest.

My critique of yours is that it looks like the face is a painting thats been pasted onto a photo. The hair and body look real, but the face doesn't. The eyes are over-done and look toy-like. The facial skin is over-smoothed.
ehm i dont know what you mean about the eyes because i only did the eyelashes and my sister has longer than that so.. and the skin if you can see is there skins texture, and yes the jaw is to much.. but i did the body the same way.. and okey youre right about that not all things have to 'warm-hearted fluffy hugfest' be but, it wassnt usefull what she sayd only on a other way if she had more information set on it you know...

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Old 01-05-2007, 10:18 PM
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Re: Glamour retouch!

Here is my try.
Color
http://i27.photobucket.com/albums/c1...g?t=1168060662

BW

http://i27.photobucket.com/albums/c1...g?t=1168060706
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Old 01-05-2007, 11:08 PM
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ehm i dont know what you mean about the eyes...
I was referring to Peano.
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