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Old 06-05-2007, 12:23 PM
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Glamour retouch! (second)

Hey all, in one of my first post on retouch pro i had a thread called glamor retouch! well, i was searching on the web for photos and i came to some other photos of the beautiful women of the same photo shoot.. so I thought lets see what people think about the picture that i retouched now of her.. because for my to know how about its with my experience with retouching, so i will post again the old photo retouch of my first threat about it, let my know what you think, its the same women only a couple of months between the retouched pictures..

i know its a bit confusing, I'm sorry

critique is welcome, especially of the pro´s?!

thanks.

(I'm sorry i cant apply bigger images but Image hack doesn't do it..:S)

'second' glamor retouch, AFTER

'second' glamor retouch, BEFORE

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Old 06-05-2007, 01:58 PM
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Re: Glamour retouch! (second)

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I'm not into retouching, but in looking at your after there are just a couple things that distract me.

1. Area over upper lip is blown out
2. There's a speck in her right eye that needs to go
3. There is some kind of hump in her lower left eye lid that looks odd.
4. The hair at center forhead is sharp and detailed while the rest is not.
5. What's all that gray on her chin and neck?
6. Dark circles under her eyes
7. A line of heavy texture down her right arm

That's probably enough to give you something to work on. :-)
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Old 06-06-2007, 05:47 AM
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Re: Glamour retouch! (second)

Hi swampy,

thanks for your reaction, what i can make up about your things you set, i probably more have to look about the little things! haha,

i will work on it, but i dont understand a few thinks maybe can you circle it or something that would be great! (nr 2,3,5)

thanks allot!
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Re: Glamour retouch! (second)

thanks, you mean by the left eye that white speckle near the iris, and by the right that black line under her iris or that white like above her under eyelash? what does anyone think about the skin work? thanks
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In the area of her tear duct.
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In the area of her tear duct.
haha allright now i get it! sorry, but thanks
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Old 06-06-2007, 01:08 PM
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Re: Glamour retouch! (second)

Hey Rudd. I would suggest to work on her hair a little bit more.The shirt is also kind of messy.As far as the picture i would try a more natural,not so barbie like retouch.The thing about retouching is to make the retouch invisibile as much as possibile.I m gonna have a go on this one later on.
Here is a new (finished i think) retouch of the last one
http://bp3.blogger.com/_a-obe28N9g4/...er+version.jpg
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Old 06-07-2007, 09:33 AM
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Hey Rudd. I would suggest to work on her hair a little bit more.The shirt is also kind of messy.As far as the picture i would try a more natural,not so barbie like retouch.The thing about retouching is to make the retouch invisibile as much as possibile.I m gonna have a go on this one later on.
Here is a new (finished i think) retouch of the last one
http://bp3.blogger.com/_a-obe28N9g4/...er+version.jpg
what you did is the first one, that one did i A long time ago, i mean this one
after second

and if that one You post you did? then i have to say that i dont degrunge etc anymore i do exually only D&B now, only sometimes I use a 20% opacity Surface blur or some dust and stratshes . In that one you post you can see on the side lines that it is blurred. but if you mean that one was from me are you wrong

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