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Old 07-17-2007, 04:41 AM
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what do you think ?

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Old 07-17-2007, 07:51 AM
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Re: what do you think ?

There is something about the depth of focus that doesn't seem right. Her facial features are very sharp, but her left shoulder, which is actually closer to the camera, is soft focus. I'm not sure how to explain what it is, but like I said the facial features are sharp yet things in front of and behind those areas are too soft.

Otherwise, excellent work. Especially the eyes.
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Old 07-17-2007, 02:41 PM
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Re: what do you think ?

the skin and highlights is waaay better this time, but it needs more contrast and the eye is a bit blurry...is this 50mm lens or 85mm?


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Old 07-18-2007, 03:28 AM
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Re: what do you think ?

superkoax: 50/1.8
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Old 07-19-2007, 11:12 AM
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Re: what do you think ?

The edge between the blurred out skin and her non-blurred lips is really odd.
Same at her eyebrows.
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