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Old 08-24-2007, 12:25 AM
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Funky Fresh! Feedback Wanted

The client requested something funky, fresh and clean.

http://www.retouchshoppe.com/retouch2.html
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Old 08-24-2007, 01:26 AM
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Re: Funky Fresh! Feedback Wanted

Hi Giulia,

I quite like what you have done with the image. I wonder if the image would have looked more balanced with the picture on the left hand side of the couch as well ?
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Old 08-24-2007, 01:31 AM
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Re: Funky Fresh! Feedback Wanted

Thank you Alison
I left the left side of the image open for possible text the client might choose to add in.
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Old 08-24-2007, 05:53 AM
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Re: Funky Fresh! Feedback Wanted

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The client requested something funky, fresh and clean.

http://www.retouchshoppe.com/retouch2.html
I love the color theme.

Take a look at his bottom left side. You cloned skin instead of bg, you have a double leg now.

Love the look. Keep them coming.
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Old 08-24-2007, 05:56 AM
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I love the color theme.

Take a look at his bottom left side. You cloned skin instead of bg, you have a double leg now.

Love the look. Keep them coming.
Wow, thanks for pointing that out. I didn't even notice that.
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Old 08-24-2007, 08:24 AM
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Re: Funky Fresh! Feedback Wanted

Giulia:----
I like the edit....however, if you look at the reflection you've added to the guys feet, they make his feet look as though they are not touching the floor at the heel....and maybe the left front leg of the sofa needs to be just a little straighter?
Regards......John
By the way, welcome to RTP
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Old 08-24-2007, 10:27 AM
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Re: Funky Fresh! Feedback Wanted

Clone out the spot of dirt on the left side, its mirroring the right side.
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Old 09-10-2007, 09:16 AM
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Re: Funky Fresh! Feedback Wanted

I think in general it's a nice retouch the tone and colours are good, but the reflection of the feets not right you have just vertically flipped it, but the reflection would'nt be like that. It would reflect from under the feet.
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