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Old 10-07-2007, 01:28 PM
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First try! Your comments please

Hello,

I´m new here in this forum and in the last days I learned more as in the last month
thanks for all your tuts and comments

here my first try
http://members.aon.at/emerkler/forumret.jpg

original
http://members.aon.at/emerkler/forumorig.jpg

your comments please

thanks
manuela
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Old 10-07-2007, 01:39 PM
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Re: First try! Your comments please

What direction were you headed, Manuela? A simple retouch and clean up? Glamor?

I find the eyes, although well done, overly sharp compared to the rest of the photo.
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Old 10-07-2007, 01:42 PM
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Re: First try! Your comments please

good shot to practice cleaning up the hair, try getting rid of some flyaways, not all of them, just the ones that are distracting and the ones that your eyes are drawn to.
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Old 10-07-2007, 02:42 PM
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Re: First try! Your comments please

oh, yes only a clean up retouch
but the lips are very heavily to retouch


maybe someone want show me (or us) another idee to retouch this picture
here is a large version from my original shot

http://members.aon.at/emerkler/original1.jpg

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sorry for my poor english
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