awesome overall retouch man...good job.
My only beef with it, those aren't real "fightclub" marks. Don't get me wrong, he got the shit beat of himself, but not from a fight, more like a bouy knife. Do you know what I am saying? I can't really be a critique from the photoshoping side of things, but I have beat in, and had my face beaten in before and that is not how you come out of it. Does that make since? Maybe if you checked out some pics online of guys right after a fight it could only make the image better. But right now it is awesome for a knife, 9mm fight
aj
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keep it up though man you are almost there.