Hello
That's a sweet shot. The people in the background are a bit distracting
I think it could use a small adjustment..
Cropping (and correction of the angle, it was slightly off) gives more focus to the little girls, also a Gaussian blur for the background to get rid of the folks in the back... then you can bring back some of the detail in the trees so they are not so flat.
attached the file so you could see what I mean.
I did it really quickly so it isn't perfect, but I hope it helps ya out.