Retouching Critique

[dalphoto]

I've poured through all of the information I could gather here and I'm looking for some critique on what I've done so far.

I've attached the original as well as my retouch.
What I've done;
-Healing brush, patch tool to remove bags and clean blemishes (I couldn't quite get the coloring to fully go away under her eyes though)
-I desaturated a little of the red from her skin (masked out the rest of the image)
-Enhanced her eye and lip color a little bit (hopefully not too much)
-Ended with a median blur with a fairly low opacity to smooth the skin

Any suggestions on things I could/should do differently are more than welcome. And of course, any comments on things that do work well as well are also welcome.

Thanks!

Dana

[dalphoto]

Just realized I put this in the wrong forum and should hav eput this in the Critique forum. Sorry about that. I can't figure out how to delete this so I can post in the proper forum.