What do u think about this foto

[deamoon]

I'm beginner so i would like to get some comments about it

HERE IS THE LINK http://i157.photobucket.com/albums/t...naujascopy.jpg

ORIGINAL
http://i157.photobucket.com/albums/t...oon/251007.jpg
Any comment welcome

[Swampy]

Deamoon, over all a pretty good job! Just a couple minor things.

1-That whispy hair is a dead give-away that the photo has been manipulated. Needs to be cleaned up.
2-The discoloration next to her left eye is distracting to me. It almost looks like an extension of her eyebrow and the downward curve is out of synch with the upward eye glance.
3-I would try to restore more of the rim of the glass. It now looks like her hair is falling into the glass instead of behind it.

Love the skin tones and color you've done.

[deamoon]

thanks for comment i looking forwards to correct it thanks 1 more time