Please give me an opinion on this touchup

[tthor71]

http://i167.photobucket.com/albums/u...1/sample85.jpg

[Swampy]

Welcome to RTP, tthor71.

You've done a great job recolorizing her face. The thing I find distracting though is the tan line on her chest.

[lilysharon]

Nice retouch.
I would erase back in her eyes and teeth but very nicely done I'd say.

[tthor71]

thanks for your input!

[scoresbaby]

Great Job.

[ctzn]

Considering black skin is rather challenging to re-touch you have done a fine job. On a critical note, I find the face to look quite 'modeled' and therefore ruins the integrity of the real factor.

Perhaps try toning down the brush strokes and just eliminating some of the blemishes. Then go in and do detail touch ups on areas that need it.

[nyxxie]

I've seen your posts on Craigslist.

[Forbidden]

She looks nice

I would tone down the blur just a bit more though ... Her complexion is very good, you really don't need a lot of it, ya know? GL

[ms152190]

Nice one.

here is my take,

it's color cast on her hair, detail in hi-light/shadow, and contrast in her face that, I thought, could improve.

MS

[hataproof818]

very nice work

[joannaras]

I like it. Good Job!

[yelhsaneerg]

looks very pretty...maybe ease up a little on the teeth whitening....it's almost glowing..other than that....great job

[i-inspire]

It is beautiful. If I could change anything, it would be the eyes and teeth... too white, almost radioactive.