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Old 01-14-2008, 10:27 AM
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Please give me an opinion on this touchup

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Old 01-14-2008, 12:52 PM
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Re: Please give me an opinion on this touchup

Welcome to RTP, tthor71.

You've done a great job recolorizing her face. The thing I find distracting though is the tan line on her chest.
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Old 01-14-2008, 01:01 PM
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Re: Please give me an opinion on this touchup

Nice retouch.
I would erase back in her eyes and teeth but very nicely done I'd say.
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Old 01-14-2008, 02:34 PM
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Re: Please give me an opinion on this touchup

thanks for your input!
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Old 01-14-2008, 03:52 PM
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Re: Please give me an opinion on this touchup

Great Job.
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Old 01-14-2008, 04:08 PM
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Re: Please give me an opinion on this touchup

Considering black skin is rather challenging to re-touch you have done a fine job. On a critical note, I find the face to look quite 'modeled' and therefore ruins the integrity of the real factor.

Perhaps try toning down the brush strokes and just eliminating some of the blemishes. Then go in and do detail touch ups on areas that need it.
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Old 01-15-2008, 11:50 PM
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Re: Please give me an opinion on this touchup

I've seen your posts on Craigslist.
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Old 01-30-2008, 09:41 PM
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She looks nice

I would tone down the blur just a bit more though ... Her complexion is very good, you really don't need a lot of it, ya know? GL
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Old 01-30-2008, 10:30 PM
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Re: Please give me an opinion on this touchup

Nice one.

here is my take,

it's color cast on her hair, detail in hi-light/shadow, and contrast in her face that, I thought, could improve.

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Old 02-04-2008, 01:17 PM
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Re: Please give me an opinion on this touchup

very nice work
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