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Old 10-17-2008, 10:48 AM
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Critique on my retouch

Hi

http://www.piyada.net/yoko.php

Just slide over with pointer.

Now in right section.... someone remove the other post of me?
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Old 10-17-2008, 05:32 PM
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Re: Now in right section....

L33t, Looks like your plastic surgery went pretty well, but there seems to still be an objectionable bump of fat below her cheek and beside her lower lip.. and the colors seem splotchy on the same side of her face (viewer left)

To delete your other post.. Go to other post and use your edit control
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Old 10-18-2008, 01:47 AM
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there seems to still be an objectionable bump of fat below her cheek and beside her lower lip.. and the colors seem splotchy on the same side of her face (viewer left)
Hi, thanks! did you mean these places?

http://d.imagehost.org/0727/fix.jpg

The green indicate areas of the fat and red is the little spot thing
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Old 10-18-2008, 03:13 AM
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Re: Now in right section....

yeppers!Those B da spots
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Old 10-18-2008, 02:14 PM
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Now I've fixed those things you bring up and editing eyebrown hope this is more success retouching

If you still don't see any changes, you need to remove caches and cookies first.
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Old 10-18-2008, 10:26 PM
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Re: Critique on my retouch

Looks good. I espcially like the color work on the hair and the removal of strays.


I would tone down the sparkle in her eyes a bit and reduce the brightness of the eye whites a tad as well. Also consider lowering the opacity a bit on the lashes. I would also reduce the sharpness on the hair some.

Aside from that the only other thing that stood out to me was the arm fat on her right arm. I would have played around with that a bit to see if I could improve it slightly.
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Old 10-18-2008, 11:19 PM
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I would tone down the sparkle in her eyes a bit and reduce the brightness of the eye

fat on her right arm..
Yeah :S I added sharp mask to hard on that one. Did you mean that little thing near her breast?
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Old 10-19-2008, 12:23 AM
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Yes, on the right. The little lump.
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Old 10-19-2008, 01:36 AM
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Re: Critique on my retouch

Now that most of the hard work is done.. I have found a few more minor things that should be attended to.. There are more, but I am not an editor, so after seeing what I have found, I will let you find the others..

BTW..
It is much better if you do not link to images on other servers, since those links can break and that makes the forum thread essentially useless for future readers. After you post your less than 100K version, you could link to a site that is hosting a larger version.

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Old 10-19-2008, 08:58 AM
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BTW..
It is much better if you do not link to images on other servers, since those links can break and that makes the forum thread essentially useless for future readers. After you post your less than 100K version, you could link to a site that is hosting a larger version.
The website is my own, I have lots of space and no bandwith limit. There's no problem with that.

I will take a closer look on these spots.
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