Critique request :)

[sirespen]

Hi guys! Here is my last retouch I've done. Comments, tips, ecc. are highly appreciated

Foto: Henri Bengtsson / imaginara.se
Retouch by me of course :P



before - after:

http://www.box.net/shared/aby16n5t85
http://www.box.net/shared/sajahakqs9




before-after detail

http://www.box.net/shared/2qgynxjcvo
http://www.box.net/shared/pscpziqgxr



before-after detail2

http://www.box.net/shared/1sbzjalu4l
http://www.box.net/shared/lsdzvj7xng

[TommyO]

Sebi,
(I guess this would be better in the critique forum)

I like what you did with tonality, skin texture, blemishes, stray hairs, iris's, background, etc. All very good.

One additional thing to consider: you added 2nd catchlight to the her left eye; may have considered removing it from right eye since it's on the edge of the iris. Or, just move it over some on both.

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[sirespen]

Hey Tommy! Yeah, you are right... Maybe a friendly admin could move the thread? I don't know how...
Thanks for the tip Tommy!

Ciao Sebastian