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Old 11-07-2008, 12:55 PM
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2 Retouch. C&C

I did'nt take these. I just did the retouch for another photographer. Let me know what you think

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http://i36.tinypic.com/2pt77fq.jpg

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http://i37.tinypic.com/2e505km.jpg


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http://i38.tinypic.com/6xssb9.jpg

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http://i37.tinypic.com/2uivhbo.jpg
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Old 11-08-2008, 08:06 AM
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Re: 2 Retouch. C&C

Hey!

Example 1.
I like how you retouched her skin, looks really good. The brighter look and cooler colors gives it freshness. What I don't like is what you did with her lips, they look unnatural and give her the "I am mad" look. One other thing. I don't know if it is a web compression thing but there seems to be a large amount of red on her chest, as if she has a sun burn. You should look at that.
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Old 11-08-2008, 01:07 PM
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Re: 2 Retouch. C&C

Skin looks okay, but I'm not fond of her eyebrows.
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Old 11-08-2008, 01:40 PM
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Re: 2 Retouch. C&C

I like both. Very nice job.
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Old 11-08-2008, 04:44 PM
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I think it's better if you didn't used smooth effects (blur) for all parts on those photographs. But the skin looks good anyway. And one more thing, that color effect "yellow-green-oldskol" not really look good for that photograph (maybe...)
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Old 11-14-2008, 07:20 AM
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Re: 2 Retouch. C&C

Nice work
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Old 11-14-2008, 07:49 AM
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Re: 2 Retouch. C&C

She may be very pretty, but she sure doesn't photograph well
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Old 11-14-2008, 08:20 AM
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I think you did very nicely on the retouches...nice work!
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Old 11-14-2008, 12:36 PM
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Re: 2 Retouch. C&C

Nice job,but you do have to fix her lips.

http://shrani.si/f/P/P4/3tyYMVAt/model4-ret.jpg
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Old 11-14-2008, 10:13 PM
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^^^ I think that makes it look fake and forced.
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