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Old 12-27-2008, 04:53 PM
Moejoe Moejoe is offline
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Please critique my retouch

Hi everyone, did not get much feedback. Anyways, I have made a minor adjustment and also posted the before and after on flikr, please do critique. I am relatively new, and just wanted to clean and glamorize the image. Now the images are on Flikr hope I get some more feedback

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http://www.flickr.com/photos/32588364@N02/?saved=1
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Old 12-27-2008, 06:21 PM
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Re: Please critique my retouch

first thing which catch the eye are lips. the lipstick you applied is out of contour and too pink (which is not in the harmony with a overall make-up). On lipstick fetish site all the models are with professional make-up and better not to change the colors.
The skin is for the taste. Somebody likes blurred skin even if you brought out some texture. I prefer more d&b.
Eyes are ok. Need some clean-up in the whites and eyeliner. And also could be good to do sharpening of the photo
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Old 12-27-2008, 07:26 PM
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Re: Please critique my retouch

skin too smooth, there seems to be a large mark on her forehead and her undereye bags could really use some removal.


Good luck
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Old 12-27-2008, 08:30 PM
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Re: Please critique my retouch

Thanks for the feedback. The skin; on the normal save there is more texture which has been lost on the scaled down and saved for web, but I am not sure if its still enough, will need to try to post full image on flikr or something.
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Old 01-01-2009, 03:35 PM
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Re: Please critique my retouch

The pics are now on flikr so critiquing should be easier.
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