critique - retouch

[CoreyByas]

Pick away! I have been changing my ways & this is one of my first in the dodge/burn.

[neumanns]

First two things that come to mind. 1) She looks a little green that may have been intentional 2) If your gonna invest that much time in the skin budget a couple minutes for the hair...At least that one stray across her face.

And on the upside, skin looks nice!

[CoreyByas]

Thanx, looking green might by my monitor is a little off, I don't know but good to know. I think I was so glad to done with the skin but good point.

little green
hair across face

Thanx for the help!!!!!!!!!

[RokcetScientist]

Agree with neumanns. Also there seems to be some imbalance in her 'eye-shadow': her left eye 'make-up' is heavier than on her right eye.

Have fun!

[Atom Kat]

Nice retouch. As above with the hair and skin, and the right (her left eye) seems a little too dark on the lid, but that could just be my personal taste

[CoreyByas]

Thank you everyone for the great input! Thanx

[heiesukeoda]

I like the retouch for the most part… A little too soft for my preference, taking away too much of the natural skin texture, degrades the art IMO.

[CoreyByas]

Thanx everyone!!