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Old 12-31-2008, 08:11 PM
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critique - retouch

Pick away! I have been changing my ways & this is one of my first in the dodge/burn.
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Old 12-31-2008, 09:47 PM
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Re: critique - retouch

First two things that come to mind. 1) She looks a little green that may have been intentional 2) If your gonna invest that much time in the skin budget a couple minutes for the hair...At least that one stray across her face.

And on the upside, skin looks nice!
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Old 01-01-2009, 01:06 AM
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Re: critique - retouch

Thanx, looking green might by my monitor is a little off, I don't know but good to know. I think I was so glad to done with the skin but good point.

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hair across face

Thanx for the help!!!!!!!!!
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Old 01-01-2009, 11:25 PM
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Re: critique - retouch

Agree with neumanns. Also there seems to be some imbalance in her 'eye-shadow': her left eye 'make-up' is heavier than on her right eye.

Have fun!
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Old 01-02-2009, 06:24 PM
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Nice retouch. As above with the hair and skin, and the right (her left eye) seems a little too dark on the lid, but that could just be my personal taste
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Old 01-09-2009, 10:20 PM
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Thank you everyone for the great input! Thanx
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Old 01-22-2009, 11:46 AM
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I like the retouch for the most part… A little too soft for my preference, taking away too much of the natural skin texture, degrades the art IMO.
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Thanx everyone!!
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