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Your picture seems to be a mixture of several things.. A bit of D&B, larger or reset eyes, lowered mouth and darkened hair.. Things missed are the yucky spotty jacket, The dark shadows left over from the darkening of the hair which causes a dark halo all the way around the hair and inside the sparse areas next to both ears but especially around every edge outline of the hair
For a WIP the D&B and getting rid of the low resolution junk looks OK and the moving of the head parts looks seem to be done well... all that remains (and it seems you have the skills!) is to clean up the dark shadows/halos everywhere around the hair, finish the jacket, and fix the complete picture from top to bottom instead of only working on the head and neck.
Looking forward to seeing you present a much larger before/after and finished picture