New Retouch Photo

[spydercam]

Got a new one for you. Any critiques/comments will be much appreciated.
Thanks!

Before

After

[LonK]

You've done a fine job straightening, cleaning up the brickwork, removing grass, etc. To take is just a step further, try correcting the perspective -- make all the frame edges (sides, top/bottom) parallel to the canvas bounds. I think this will strengthen the composition.

[spydercam]

Thank you LonK, do you mean the door frame? Trying to understand what you mean, sorry.

[LonK]

Yes, the door frame. For example...

[spydercam]

Oh okay I got it now, thanks. I never thought to do that.

[Alex Retoucher]

not bad. just two things
1. too bright zone on corset (it was better on original)
2. and shadow from hand-rail

[spydercam]

Originally Posted by Alex Retoucher

not bad. just two things
1. too bright zone on corset (it was better on original)
2. and shadow from hand-rail

I just almost slapped myself in the head for messing those up.
Thanks alot guys, anyone else see anything. I really appreciate everything so far.

[alshaiji]

nice work there
two things i would add to this photo
1- More clen up to the brick wall (spend more time on details)
2- I would add a vivid color to the wooden door frame and try to fix up the upper part (the green one) with some cloning

all in all
Well Done

[Godmother]

Tones... Face - chest - Arms --- You have 3 different skintones/light (specially concentrate on her green chest)

Dress could use some ironing.

and everything mentioned before.

Here's a 5 minute sample.

xx

[spydercam]

Originally Posted by alshaiji

nice work there
two things i would add to this photo
1- More clen up to the brick wall (spend more time on details)
2- I would add a vivid color to the wooden door frame and try to fix up the upper part (the green one) with some cloning

all in all
Well Done

Thanks, appreciate that.

[spydercam]

Originally Posted by Godmother

Tones... Face - chest - Arms --- You have 3 different skintones/light (specially concentrate on her green chest)

Dress could use some ironing.

and everything mentioned before.

Here's a 5 minute sample.

xx

That's really nice Godmother, thanks for bringing that to my attention.
Your dress looks alot better, as does the skin. Nice work, thanks again.