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How would you improve this image???

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Old 07-25-2009, 10:24 AM
goncaloclaro goncaloclaro is offline
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Hi there

My name is Goncalo Claro and im a photographer, and i try to do my own retouch...

I have this picture, and im happy with this result, but i think that something is missing in the picture, but i dont know what...

Could you give me your opinions and points of view???

Thanks
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Old 07-25-2009, 10:32 AM
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Re: How would you improve this image???

Sure, where's the picture?
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Old 07-25-2009, 10:38 AM
goncaloclaro goncaloclaro is offline
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Ahahahahahh

OK here it comes

Thanks for the warning
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Old 07-25-2009, 10:59 AM
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Re: How would you improve this image???

I think this is a super image and this may seem "picky" but i feel the little thing sometime make a big difference, my opinion ONLY. (1) triangle background area between models (formed by arms) does not have same separation as rest of background, (2) Lower back of model on left, it appears to be the finger of other model showing, and almost looks like rolls in back fat, (3) might also soften wrinkles in neck of model on right caused by head position.
I really feel weird commenting on other peoples work so please take this as my personal critique and not as criticism as I stated at the start great shot.
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Old 07-25-2009, 11:42 AM
goncaloclaro goncaloclaro is offline
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Re: How would you improve this image???

Hi there

Thanks for your opinion, i forgot to say that the image ins't finished on the skin treatment, so the wrinkles on the neck will disappear...

Let me rephrase my question, what would you do about, the ambient light, the colours, should i pop out this or that a little more...

I dont know if you understanded my question ( english is not my mother language)

Thanks
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Old 01-09-2010, 06:00 PM
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Re: How would you improve this image???

Hi goncaloclaro

I just had a play . . hope you don't mind.

Great picture, we could do with many more like this

Not sure what this will look like as I was not at a decent computer.

But you get the idea, this pic had a very red cast and heavey in the blacks.

anyway no harm done I hope.

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