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Old 08-03-2009, 02:48 PM
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I'd like to see the after, but I'm not mature enough.
Who knew!
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Old 08-04-2009, 12:35 AM
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Re: some chocolate retouching)

okey, i got it..

here is normal link:

http://img188.imageshack.us/img188/9...sbyhellopi.jpg
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Old 08-04-2009, 12:11 PM
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Re: some chocolate retouching)

Probably nit-picky, but I agree with !jordan, that is a very large tear spill to come from such a dry eye. Might help to have a small drop welling inside of the lower lid where the trail begins.
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Old 08-04-2009, 01:46 PM
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Re: some chocolate retouching)

Actually, by law physics tear should be dropping somewhere sideways...cause she is lying.

this is what I've noticed after..
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Old 08-04-2009, 02:19 PM
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Re: some chocolate retouching)

wow the image is beautifully done. I love the concept and how you cropped the image.
You also did very well retouching her skin. You didn't over do it. The only I want to point out is that my eyes draw to the strong high lights at the bottom first rather than her face.
I think the highlights are too strong down there.
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Old 08-04-2009, 03:42 PM
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Re: some chocolate retouching)

Now I know why the photo was originally intended for mature audiences.
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Old 08-05-2009, 05:24 PM
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Re: some chocolate retouching)

Eyes are too white IMO.
Skin could maybe use some dodge / burn / heal. Personal preference I guess. But the eyes are overdone.
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Old 08-06-2009, 01:47 AM
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thx for your point of view!
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Old 08-06-2009, 02:39 AM
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Re: some chocolate retouching)

the retouch photo looks a bit overexposure (half of her face is starting to disappear). also agree 'bout the eye (doesn't look rounded. kinda flat). minor touch up on her upper lip (add lil lipstick where make up artist might have miss) and darker color probably look better. the background looks better imo because less distraction.

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Old 08-06-2009, 03:18 AM
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Re: some chocolate retouching)

thx, next time I'll be more attentive )
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