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Old 08-15-2009, 07:39 PM
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Retoque sutil videotutorial

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Old 08-15-2009, 09:08 PM
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Re: ::Retoque sutil videotutorial::

Hola Oscar, perdon, no hablo espanol. No te preocupes el idioma. Que son muy talentosos. Muchas gracias por el video!
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Old 08-15-2009, 11:20 PM
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Re: ::Retoque sutil videotutorial::

Gracias por comentar.

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Old 08-16-2009, 01:19 AM
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Retoque sutil videotutorial

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Hola

Su trabajo es muy bueno y muchas gracias por el video tutorial que es generosa de ustedes, les pido disculpas por mi español no es bueno el idioma
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Old 08-19-2009, 06:16 PM
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Re: ::Retoque sutil videotutorial::

Im sorry but your technique is very sloppy. Esta mucho malo
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Old 08-19-2009, 07:48 PM
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Re: ::Retoque sutil videotutorial::

I appreciate the comments which are to improve.
Could I think my technique specify why bad? If you give suggestions for improvement are welcome.

Sorry my english, thanks.
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Old 08-19-2009, 09:22 PM
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Re: ::Retoque sutil videotutorial::

well i wont try to do this in spanish again, that went well on the other thread lol. ok , so theres still a blotch left where you patched the zit on her chin, you can see the selection around the eyes where you tried to brighten them, whatever you did to lop off the edges of her lips look odd, and the image has a bland greenish cast. I dont really know what you were trying to achieve, but the execution is just sloppy and quick. But what do I know..... certainly not spanish
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Old 08-21-2009, 02:59 PM
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Re: ::Retoque sutil videotutorial::

En efecto, creativo, la intencion tuya fue de obtener cambios sutiles, pero como comento garibaldi, esos cambios dejaron huellas - es decir, no fueron tan sutiles como se esperaba.

Comparando tonos de la piel acerca de los ojos (el ojo izuierdo como se ve in la imagen), dara mejor resultado al aclarar la piel. Al enfocar esos cambios y comparandolos con los tonos de la piel alrededor dara mejor resultado. Tambien considera hace los cambios a cada parte independientemente. Trata un ojo, y despues el otro, usand la piel cerca de cada ojo.

Los cambios a la geografia de la cabeza y la nariz son un poco drasticos - pero si esa fue la intencion entonces el resultado queda a tu discrecion.

La mancha de la espinilla cerca de la mejilla izquierda aun se nota - otra vez, el tono de la piel no iguala a resto de la cara.

Quizas al aclarar la imagen en total se perdio el tono rosado de las esquinas de los labios - esto da la impression que borraste las esquinas porque perdiste todo contraste ahi en esas partes.
Considera aclarar la imagen en regiones selectas - por ejemplo, aclara tercera parte de la cara (frente, ojos, puente de la nariz).
Segundo, las mejillas.
Tercero, la barbilla, boca, labios y parte baja de la cara

Por final, la imagen sobretodo lleva un tinte verde/amarillo que quiza resulto al aplicar la aclaracion.

Espero y te sirva de algo mis comentarios.


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creativo, your intention was to obtain subtle changes, but as garibaldi already remarked, those chagnes left traces - that is to say, the changes were not as subtle as expected.

By comparing the tonal values of near the eyes (the left eye in the image) you will get better results in lightening the skin. By focusing on changes then comparing them to the surrounding skin tones the resuls will be better. Also, consider making these chagnes independantly; work on one eye, then the other, using surrounding skin as a guide

The geographical changes to the head and nose are a bit drastic - but if that was the intention then that is at your discretion.

The patch of skin where the pimple is near the cheek is still noticeable - again, use surrounding sking to match tonal values.

Perhaps when you brightened the image you lost some of the pink values at teh corners of the lips - this give the impression that you erased these areas when you lost contrast there and in other parts.
Consider working in selected regions - for example, brighten up teh upper part of the face (forehead, eyes, bridge of teh nose)
second, the cheeks
third, the chin, mouth, lips and lower portion of the face.

Finally, the overall image has a green/yellow tint that may have resulted when you brightened it.

I hope my remarks are of some help to you
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Old 08-21-2009, 07:31 PM
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Re: ::Retoque sutil videotutorial::

I agree with the remarks made thus far. Also why reconstruct the nose? How far does one go with the photoshop?
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Old 08-21-2009, 10:07 PM
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Re: ::Retoque sutil videotutorial::

Muy buenas observaciones Vernon, te lo agradezco y las tomaré muy en cuenta para mi camino que recién inicio en este ramo del retoque con Photoshop.
Tengo tiempo usándolo, pero en retoque estoy muy novato aún, y este tipo de comentarios que sin duda tomaré en cuenta me serán muy útiles.
Los cambios de la la forma de la cara y la nariz, si fueron decisión por gusto personal. Pero estoy consiente que cambian a la modelo en forma drástica.

Saludos y nuevamente agradezco tus observaciones.
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