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Old 10-06-2009, 02:05 PM
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Yours ideas for retouching my photo

First of hello everybody. Im new here but for a bit of time im on the forum here. So - HELLO

Next thing is that i would liek to ask you to make a little retouch of my photo. I know that its from the pure camera (Nikon d70s) but I wonder if there is a chance to make some good image of it.

I've put a RAW file here so you have best way to start with it
www.piotrszmidt.com/download/retouchpro.nef


The reason i asked you for that retoutche is that i need some ideas ans some vision how to work out on my photos in the future.

Few day ago I'v stoped and figured out that my photos are all the same and i would like to work on it a bit. Maybe you could give me some ideas of it

You can see my works here: Studio Colorbox

Thanks for help anyway
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Old 10-07-2009, 01:59 AM
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Re: Yours ideas for retouching my photo

no one ? any idea?
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Old 10-07-2009, 05:03 AM
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Re: Yours ideas for retouching my photo

I won't retouch it for you but based on a quick look on that thumbnail, you need to do the cleaning up first. Aside from all the regular work on her you need to smooth the background out as well. After that I'd reconstruct the part of the shoe that is cut out and add some background at the bottom to give some breathing space to the composition. Re straighten her because she seems to be falling to the right. Then stretch her legs because they are quite short. Reshape her left arm and make it thiner after the shoulder, readjust the dress that is falling off her left breast, Color correct the entire image and lighten up the puppy to make it pop more.
Just from a quick look, much more work required but that should get you started
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Old 10-07-2009, 07:24 AM
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Re: Yours ideas for retouching my photo

KarimNassar - thanks, but that part as you wrote i've already did maybe i will upload when i get home my version of retutch. Then maybe you could give me some more advise
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Old 10-07-2009, 10:17 AM
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Re: Yours ideas for retouching my photo

sure post it on here interested to see what you came up with
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Old 10-07-2009, 12:13 PM
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it's a quick one... just to give you some ideas
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Old 10-07-2009, 03:03 PM
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Re: Yours ideas for retouching my photo

i made m secound retoutch. what do you think about it?

big file here: http://www.studio-colorbox.com/proje...99/ula_big.jpg
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Old 10-08-2009, 08:35 AM
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Re: Yours ideas for retouching my photo

way too blury on her crater, you need to learn the dodge and burn technique. Lots of posts about it on these boards. It's a lot more time consuming than using gaussian blur but you get much better results
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Old 10-08-2009, 09:27 AM
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Re: Yours ideas for retouching my photo

karimnassar - i will try to learn about D&B but for the moment i've made that photo i used gausianblure/hipass techniq.
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Old 10-08-2009, 04:26 PM
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Hello!
That's not about giving any ideas as I'm a complete beginner. Just playing around.
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