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Old 08-18-2010, 07:35 PM
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Hi, I did a retouch about the reknown brand Suzuki. Tell me what you think, I like critics they make me progress.

If you want to see the photo bigger: http://rsphotocreation.deviantart.com/#/d2wq332

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Old 08-18-2010, 08:07 PM
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Re: Tell me what you think ;)

Normally it works, what does it say?
Otherwise try to go to my gallery here: http://rsphotocreation.deviantart.com/gallery/

You should see the photo here

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Old 08-18-2010, 09:19 PM
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Re: Tell me what you think ;)

On quick review, I wonder why the white glow coming out of her skirt on upper thighs?

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Old 08-18-2010, 09:48 PM
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Re: Tell me what you think ;)

The links work now. The retouch looks good although the highlight running along her nose is a little too bright. Regards, Murray
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Old 08-19-2010, 02:29 AM
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Re: Tell me what you think ;)

Thanks for your replies I maybe used too much glow. I'll try to take notes to what you said, I'll post new retouchings soon.

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Old 08-19-2010, 10:08 AM
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Re: Tell me what you think ;)

Nice clean up of extraneous element - the art of subtraction. I think you are definitely improving. Some images in your portfolio are pretty nice.

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Old 08-19-2010, 11:54 AM
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Re: Tell me what you think ;)

Thanks a lot I try to do my best to improve my skills.
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Old 08-19-2010, 12:38 PM
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Re: Tell me what you think ;)

funny thing - I thought you were someone else at first - someone with a similar kind of name who also asks for critiques regularly.
Anyways, keep up the good work.
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Old 08-19-2010, 12:44 PM
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Re: Tell me what you think ;)

I used to ask for critics when I started to learn Photoshop and retouching. But it was months ago, maybe it was me lol

Shift Studio, I'm looking for partnership in order to improve my gallery, to have brands and great names. In September I'll retouch for L'Oréal Paris as a partnership in order to give to my gallery a better style.

If you have photos from brands or famous people/events we could make a deal: I retouch like 2 or 3 photos for free. I send them back to you so you can use them even without my name, and me I use the retouching I made on them for my gallery, with your name in the credits.

If you're interested please mail me here: rsphotocreation.contact@gmail.com

*Sorry for my English, I'm French lol
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Old 08-19-2010, 01:20 PM
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Re: Tell me what you think ;)

thanks RS - I'll keep that in mind.
BTW the English is fine.
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