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Old 01-11-2018, 05:22 PM
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Before and After.

Hi guys,

Here is an image from a workshop I held with father and son, they were both keen photographers and wanted me to teach them how to use flashes.
Long story short, I was just going through the images they captured and found, the image I'm sharing here, one of them quite interesting (to my eye at least) - and here is my show off, bit of retouching I did on it.

http://www.retouchpro.com/forums/att...1&d=1515712705

http://www.retouchpro.com/forums/att...1&d=1515712862
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Old 01-12-2018, 06:36 PM
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Re: Before and After.

Could use more local color adjustments, and camera left under eye should retain original quality, ti looks too soft. Same goes for the forehead. The over-sharpening creates a white streak in the lips ,and lips in general could be adjusted so that the mouth is fully closed.
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Old 01-12-2018, 07:51 PM
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Re: Before and After.

Overall, very nice work! To my eye, the skin texture was made a bit too smooth in these areas:

https://s9.postimg.org/jtpl8fyjx/retouch.jpg
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Old 01-14-2018, 01:36 AM
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Re: Before and After.

Just a play .. maybe a different perspective.


Cheers.
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Old 01-14-2018, 10:01 AM
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Re: Before and After.

Another interpretation with a different color palette.
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Old 01-14-2018, 11:00 AM
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Re: Before and After.

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Another interpretation with a different color palette.
Like your choice of colours!
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Old 01-14-2018, 01:33 PM
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Re: Before and After.

His skin has many oversaturated areas on the left.
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