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T Paul
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Registered: August 2001
Location: USA
Posts: 2,858
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Sun January 16, 2005 6:18pm
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An interesting perspective choice. I just wish the image was a little larger as it's hard to see all the detail at this size.
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tozzo
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Registered: December 2004
Location: New Jersey
Posts: 5
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T Paul
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Registered: August 2001
Location: USA
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Tue January 18, 2005 8:38pm
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Much better...now I can see the detail!
You did a good job punching up the color, but perhaps a bit too much sharpening. As for the composition, I’m afraid this one needs a little work. I like that the perspective is a bit out of the ordinary, but it is missing something. You have a strong leading line that pulls you into the photo, but the problem is that it’s not leading to anything. You have a drink and tray in the foreground, a lot of trash and water and seats, but no real attention-getter? This might have worked better shot at more of a diagonal angle and with more rows of seats OR a closer more macro shot.
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Swampy
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Registered: February 2005
Location: The Swamps of Florida
Posts: 4,417
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Fri December 28, 2007 1:23pm
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I like this shot, Tozzo. It has a grittiness about it that would be so much fun to paint in a grunge style with bright colors!
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Kraellin
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Registered: April 2005
Location: somewhere over there
Posts: 8,750
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Thu August 7, 2008 8:31pm
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hmmm, interesting choice of perspective and composition. i like the clarity of this and the large depth of field. to me, the focus is the rain, which is a cleansing agent, contrasting the trash, which is being washed away. the shot wouldnt really work very well without the rain.
i dont think it's going to win any beauty contests, but i do see a story here. so, good 
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