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Kraellin
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Registered: April 2005
Location: somewhere over there
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Sat June 20, 2009 12:44am
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algarve,
i like this as a shot, but it's missing something. i'm not quite sure what. maybe a dark background for more punch in contrast, or a nude in that same pose for something more alluring... i'm not sure what, but it's just missing something. good framing. maybe it's just missing that i dont know the woman. i think if i knew her, i'd be quite happy with the image, being that of a friend, but as a stranger (to me), i want something more to the image, something to make it stand out more. the pose is ok. the facial expression tells a bit of a story, but there's still something missing (for me). i wish i could put my finger on it. it's the difference of this is something i'd keep in my photo album, but not on my wall. whatever that is, that's the difference here.
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Craig
(primarily using paint shop pro photo xi)
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Algarve Images
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Registered: March 2009
Location: Algarve and Spain.
Posts: 362
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There may be something missing,
what it is, i haven't a clue, don't have a black background yet so everything is hi key for the moment... it's just really one of a few test shots done while my friends were here on Tuesday, i try to get in as much practice as possible. "Posing nude".. thought didn't occur to me, here mother is a good friend also she has not turned 18 yet... there is the thing that i've never photographed anyone nude yet, may be i'll get the opportunity at some stage,
Gary..
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Kraellin
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Tue June 23, 2009 10:43pm
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it's fine, gary. i was just looking if it could be punched up a bit. it's still a good shot. nice composition, good lighting, nice framing... maybe a bit closer to the subject? hehe, sorry, i'll shut up now 
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Craig
(primarily using paint shop pro photo xi)
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