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Asalce
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Registered: November 2009
Posts: 1
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Wed December 15, 2010 9:39pm
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Basically what I wanted to achieve was a beach with amazing colors and a model sort of like a mermaid with legs coming back to her spot, like Ariel.
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Ariel Salcé - SalceDesigns
http://www.behance.net/salcedesigns
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spotter
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Registered: May 2010
Location: England
Posts: 96
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Tue January 4, 2011 6:10am
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I really like what you have done with the model and the sea. I think the sky needs to be less cyan. The horizon is on a slant which puts me off a bit.
Lovely technique though.
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Asalce
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Registered: November 2009
Posts: 1
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Wed January 5, 2011 12:28pm
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I agree, the sky is a little overdone and I did not even notice the horizon situation, my bad 
Thank you for the comment !! I will keep this things in mind for the next  !
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Ariel Salcé - SalceDesigns
http://www.behance.net/salcedesigns
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biggerilla
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Registered: January 2011
Location: Peterborough ON
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Sat January 15, 2011 12:32am
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A nice overall adjustment to the image and I don't mind the horizon as that is how it was shot in camera. Personally, I would like a bit less contrast. Just a bit.
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Kraellin
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Registered: April 2005
Location: somewhere over there
Posts: 8,750
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Wed February 16, 2011 10:09pm
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mostly a good fix. the sky is a bit over-saturated, but easily fixed. the model is almost centered in the shot and might have been a touch better off to one side, rule of thirds and all. i also tend to not like the full body of the model in shots like these. an upper torso/head shot against that background would have worked better with the model being more in the foreground. as is, the shot, the model, tends to fade into the background too much and she's the real focus. so, bring her into a more prominent and interesting view.
still, a good fix of a decent a shot.
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Craig
(primarily using paint shop pro photo xi)
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mfgriggs
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Registered: January 2005
Location: Camden,SC
Posts: 35
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Thu February 24, 2011 2:02pm
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I like the artwork but I believe the shot could be a little better. As mentioned earlier it would be nice if she were a little further to the right of the frame. What really bugs me is that you cut her feet off. Otherwise, I really like it.
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Common sense is for common people
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Ali Sabri
Junior Member
Registered: February 2011
Location: model@alisabri.Com
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martink
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Registered: March 2011
Location: cumbria
Posts: 5
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Mon March 21, 2011 6:00pm
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Wow, thats quite an improvement!
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