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  • Critique - heh my first time :D

    hi
    its not my first time retouch, but is little deep, little bit of painting face ( little cg style ) i like nimfabebeaida works and i try ;D

    look :

    http://images33.fotosik.pl/34/afd70a7cbd776937.jpg

  • #2
    Re: Critique - heh my first time

    Hi Hubiii

    I think the model is pretty, the pose is OK, and most of the photoshopping
    is fine.... If I have any critical comment it is the skin color or lack of it.
    I really don't know what shade it is but it looks gray to me.

    Tom

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    • #3
      Re: Critique - heh my first time

      I like it a lot. Im quite fond of the desaturation of the skin. Amy Dresser does it a lot.
      Its only the skirt that looks somewhat more "painted" than the rest.

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      • #4
        Re: Critique - heh my first time

        tnx ...i change skin tone right is gray, but i will make photo blue and gray phototone with desaturation colors
        ... skirt im make new

        today i add changes

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        • #5
          Re: Critique - heh my first time

          http://www.fotosik.pl/pokaz_obrazek/...97f875a5a.html
          i think is better

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          • #6
            Re: Critique - heh my first time

            the way the shadow falls on her belly, it looks like it's sticking out. That makes her look a bit fat.

            Also I would rather see something of a contact shadow on the floor. I know it's not a realistic background, but she does cast a shadow, there's just no contact shadow.

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            • #7
              Re: Critique - heh my first time

              Good attempt for your first time. I like how you enhanced her breast. Your second copy is an improvement. Although it does look as though she's floating or she was cut and pasted in. I would use a bit of shadow to give the effect that she actually belongs there.

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              • #8
                Re: Critique - heh my first time

                thanks guys for tips
                when i have free time ,im tune this photo
                last changes
                - changed color skirt and better shiny
                - little changed shadows but im still working
                - background is in progress

                last version

                http://www.fotosik.pl/pokaz_obrazek/...0ffc67ade.html

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