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    Please tell me what you think about my retouching. How could I improve it, my goods and bads.

    here is the link

    https://odesk-prod-att.s3.amazonaws....BM%2FyRaZAc%3D


    Thank you.
    Last edited by jphilsantos; 05-22-2012, 10:58 PM. Reason: changing links

  • #2
    Re: Judge me

    There isn't too much edited here.
    Good: I like the upped contrast mostly, you did a good job on the arm and the smoothing.

    I would remove the toe line on her left foot. There is a distinctive line on her ankles seperating a tonal difference from her legs to her feet, her feet need to be matched in tone to her legs for a more even appearance.

    This one is purely opinion but I feel shading on her face is too deep for the scene she is in. It seems too lite outside for her hair to cast such a deep shadow.

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    • #3
      Re: Judge me

      Oh yeah also, the people removed in the background is good, but I would also take out the tree or whaever it is that's going straight up through the back of her head.

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      • #4
        Re: Judge me

        The Sky is white and appears washed out.

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        • #5
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          Thank you for your honest comments I really appreciate it.

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          • #6
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            Maybe add some fill light so her face isn't so dark

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