Judge me

[jphilsantos]

Please tell me what you think about my retouching. How could I improve it, my goods and bads.

here is the link

https://odesk-prod-att.s3.amazonaws....BM%2FyRaZAc%3D


Thank you.

[Bressler]

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There isn't too much edited here.
Good: I like the upped contrast mostly, you did a good job on the arm and the smoothing.

I would remove the toe line on her left foot. There is a distinctive line on her ankles seperating a tonal difference from her legs to her feet, her feet need to be matched in tone to her legs for a more even appearance.

This one is purely opinion but I feel shading on her face is too deep for the scene she is in. It seems too lite outside for her hair to cast such a deep shadow.

[Bressler]

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Oh yeah also, the people removed in the background is good, but I would also take out the tree or whaever it is that's going straight up through the back of her head.

[Ruzzez]

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The Sky is white and appears washed out.

[jphilsantos]

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Thank you for your honest comments I really appreciate it.

[mommyof4qteez]

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Maybe add some fill light so her face isn't so dark