Critique Please

[serttuse]

What's your advice for my photo
Thank you very much

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[genf]

Re: Critique Please

My advice is: rotate it 90 degrees clockwise.

[Mike Needham]

Re: Critique Please

What genf said. I would say it is a bit of a lazy retouch. clone marks are still visible, no discernible d&b, the hair could do with some work for strays and the like, the lips should also be retouched and the eyes need more work too.

Sorry to come over all negative, especially if you are still learning (aren't we all!)

Oh and welcome to the forum. A brave start

[serttuse]

Re: Critique Please

What genf said. I would say it is a bit of a lazy retouch. clone marks are still visible, no discernible d&b, the hair could do with some work for strays and the like, the lips should also be retouched and the eyes need more work too.

Sorry to come over all negative, especially if you are still learning (aren't we all!)

Oh and welcome to the forum. A brave start

Thank you so much
I will try what you say : )