New Retouched Composite Please Critique

[Shaheen]

Hello,

Please take a look at my recent work and give me your opinions. Also let me know if you enjoy the airbrushed look and know any resources on this technique.

p.s. attachment may be NSFW

[hellomarcy]

Re: New Retouched Composite Please Critique

i think everything looks good. but that lil flare pulls my eye in to the text...and then to that nasty stroke around the cursive text. but its just my opinion and this is my first post so what do i know? haha!

[Mike Needham]

Re: New Retouched Composite Please Critique

Text is truly horrible, the airbrush feel suits the overall style well although I suspect you have some blown highlights.

[mlerrigo]

Re: New Retouched Composite Please Critique

Good layout but it looks more pink than "Purple" and that thing she's sitting on looks like it's stuck up her arse.

[Shaheen]

Re: New Retouched Composite Please Critique

Thanks very much for you opinions!

[Mike Needham]

Re: New Retouched Composite Please Critique

that thing she's sitting on looks like it's stuck up her arse.

I believe that may be a pair of knickers, it's the point of them

[dataflow]

Re: New Retouched Composite Please Critique

I believe that may be a pair of knickers, it's the point of them

when i seen that i thought it was her arse cut open with blood coming out